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Zen - A Haiku

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Heating summertime

A modern, weird zen kicks

enjoying the wave


Thanks to Datamuse, whose word engine was used to complete the poem. Created on 10th July 2019.


Auto Praise for Zen - A Haiku

"The juxtaposition of zen and wave is truly inspired."

- The Daily Tale


"I don't like short poems. So why am I reviewing a haiku, you may wonder? Well, I liked the title - 'Zen'. It went down hill from there."

- Enid Kibbler


"Amazing how so few words can set a scene so perfectly. I close my eyes and all I can see is the heating summertime."

- Hit the Spoof


"I felt that I was a zen. It was spooky. I hope to read more by x. Perhaps next time, something longer."

- Zob Gloop


"I've always wanted to write a haiku about a zen. I can't belive x has beaten me to it."

- Betty Borison


"Heating summertime is a popular first line for a haiku. It's incredible how much diversity can be achieved with those final lines."

- Chris Critic, otherwise known as Cristic